Can you guys give me some feeback

We're putting YOU in the drivers seat!

Moderators: admin, mdc, TAXIstaff

rtucker
Newbie
Newbie
Posts: 18
Joined: Sat May 05, 2007 11:25 pm
Contact:

Can you guys give me some feeback

Post by rtucker » Thu Jul 19, 2007 12:48 am

What do you think of this song everyone? It's called Jason Michael...http://www.broadjam.com/transmit/transm ... sq=1Robbie

emusic
Getting Busy
Getting Busy
Posts: 54
Joined: Tue Jun 23, 2009 5:20 pm
Contact:

Re: Can you guys give me some feeback

Post by emusic » Thu Jul 19, 2007 1:38 pm

Very sketchy sound. The melodies is ok, but the total change at 00:40 breaks away as a totally new song (for me). I also miss some structure of it all. ANd here came that change again (chorus?). That mood change totally messes it up for me.The good thing to say is part of the melodies is ok.Get some more structure and production into it, and glue that chorus in so it makes more sense. Allthough I don´t think this tune will pass ordinary in my ears, even with those bits fit in.No offence.

rtucker
Newbie
Newbie
Posts: 18
Joined: Sat May 05, 2007 11:25 pm
Contact:

Excellent

Post by rtucker » Thu Jul 19, 2007 4:43 pm

That's awesome, that is what I actually wanted to hear. I am trying to start a different style of music, that is more of an adventure than a quest for cash. But cool, thanks for the review, I am excited to see what kind of a critic I get back for it from taxi.Robbie

emusic
Getting Busy
Getting Busy
Posts: 54
Joined: Tue Jun 23, 2009 5:20 pm
Contact:

Re: Can you guys give me some feeback

Post by emusic » Fri Jul 20, 2007 5:35 am

Kudos for trying to think along new lines, but the song need to be more "hooky" imo.

apjc10
Getting Busy
Getting Busy
Posts: 53
Joined: Thu May 24, 2007 1:59 am
Gender: Male
Contact:

Re: Can you guys give me some feeback

Post by apjc10 » Fri Jul 20, 2007 9:45 pm

I would have to agree. The song is all over the place and even when is settled in it is still just okay. I mean no disrespect...sometimes it just doesn't work.

frequency
Newbie
Newbie
Posts: 21
Joined: Sun Jul 15, 2007 12:28 pm
Contact:

Re: Can you guys give me some feeback

Post by frequency » Tue Jul 24, 2007 3:48 pm

i like it... not the same old same old. nice originality

rtucker
Newbie
Newbie
Posts: 18
Joined: Sat May 05, 2007 11:25 pm
Contact:

comments

Post by rtucker » Thu Jul 26, 2007 4:30 pm

thanks. I really dig it

billg
Serious Musician
Serious Musician
Posts: 2524
Joined: Fri Jan 12, 2007 11:23 am
Gender: Male
Contact:

Re: Can you guys give me some feeback

Post by billg » Thu Jul 26, 2007 4:39 pm

Well, if you were going for something different . . . mission accomplished! I'm not sure what to think of your tune but I'll take some of what your smokin'! -billg-

bobbydazzler
Active
Active
Posts: 47
Joined: Mon Nov 13, 2006 1:10 am
Gender: Male
Location: Sydney, Australia
Contact:

Re: Can you guys give me some feeback

Post by bobbydazzler » Thu Jul 26, 2007 6:24 pm

mmmm... part of me really likes the complete left field approach... although when you think about it alot of songs have real contrast... Sgt Peppers, Bohemian rhap, alot of Arctic Monkeys... in this song in particular each part sounds like they could be good songs in their own right... however I am a big fan of doing what ever you feel like the song wants... formulaic music might make money but it can be pretty boring too.. and as you say money ain't the reason being the song.. good on ya mate..

rtucker
Newbie
Newbie
Posts: 18
Joined: Sat May 05, 2007 11:25 pm
Contact:

Re: Can you guys give me some feeback

Post by rtucker » Thu Jul 26, 2007 10:06 pm

thanks once again.

Post Reply

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 7 guests