"Castle" [Alt-Rock]

[heckxx]

Hey all, I just finished up an incredibly good mix of my song "Castle". I think I did post this song here before, but its changed alot since then. Anyways, I'm just looking for any comments and criticisms on this song, I plan to finalize and release the song on an EP in a few weeks. Thanks! Lyrics are below.http://soundclick.com/share?songid=7141 ... -------You always smileBut deep behind those shades, there is no lightTo guide your soul tonightTo keep her innocence alive this timeThis timeShe bleeds onto the pillowcaseIt flows out her eyesIt flows out her damaged heartIt flows out her mindAnd all you do is climb those stairsLight a cigarette, and show us your evil smile(You're up so high)You stand on your castle above usNo one takes your side(You're up so high)You break another spirit beneath usYou still wonder whyThere is no one on your sideAnd all the friends you thought you madeThey poison you with poison bladesAnd all the hearts that you betrayedThey spit their blood upon your faceAnd all you do is climb those stairsLight a match and burn the stainsOn all the clothes you wear(You're up so high)You stand on your castle above usNo one takes your side(You're up so high)You break another spirit beneath usYou still wonder whyThere is no one on your side(You're up so high)And no one takes your sideWhen your castle's burning down(You're up so high)Still you wonder whyYour castle's falling through the groundAnd they will open up your gatesThey will expose your cheating waysIts time to turn your face awayAway...