Christmas Punk

[JonathanEarthenMusic]

Hey all,

Looking for feedback on this really fun sarcastic Christmas song which is a collaboration. I think it is getting much closer to being ready, but I feel like the vocals need to be smoothed out a bit, but we could also use some feedback otherwise on everything else, as we would like to submit to a christmas listing that just came in.

Thanks a lot if you're able to listen! https://s.disco.ac/owyrplejvlfj
-Jonathan

[deantaylor]

I like it. I remember an earlier version. This is rounding into shape nicely.

1. Overall the vocal is pretty good. I think the weakest vocal parts are the verse vocals, 0.15-0.24 and 1.08-1.17. Those seem a bit clumsy. Flow could be better there. Maybe re-sing those parts or drop the level a tad to hide them.

2. I can't quite make it out. Is the hook/title "Merry Christmas Dear" .. it's 'dear' that I can't quite make out, kinda sounds like 'here' or 'cheer'

[JonathanEarthenMusic]

I like it. I remember an earlier version. This is rounding into shape nicely.

1. Overall the vocal is pretty good. I think the weakest vocal parts are the verse vocals, 0.15-0.24 and 1.08-1.17. Those seem a bit clumsy. Flow could be better there. Maybe re-sing those parts or drop the level a tad to hide them.

2. I can't quite make it out. Is the hook/title "Merry Christmas Dear" .. it's 'dear' that I can't quite make out, kinda sounds like 'here' or 'cheer'

Awesome, thank you so much for listening. Yes actually, "Merry Christmas Dear" will be the name of the song, and that's good to know! I thought similarly about the vocals, good to have confirmation...

Very much appreciate your ears once again