I just wanted to get some feedback on a Christmas song I submitted to the listing below. It already passed, but I'd like to have it edited for future submissions. Any feedback on the mix would be great (I've been working on it a lot lately so I'd like some comments from fresh ears). It's the track "This Year" that's on my Taxi page. I had a female vocalist that I went to Berklee with sing on it for me.
ORIGINAL CHRISTMAS SONGS (in ALL genres) are needed by the Owner of an outstanding Music Library with a very long list of high-end Film and TV placements. He's looking for Christmas songs that have a contemporary production that brings the holiday spirit to life. Lyric themes are fairly wide open, but please don't submit anything too cheeky, juvenile, or inappropriate. Show a little respect to Santa

"This Year" on my Taxi page(Lyrics are included). Any feedback is a huge help and greatly appreciated.
Thanks!
Joe