Comedy Q thoughts

[Uttenreither]

Hi all,

I missed the deadline for a base driven cue for comedy.

But, I still hold out hope that one day the entire world will laugh at my track. That way I can prove to my wife that I am not a joke.

All thoughts are appreciated. I would love to improve.

Hip Hop Comedy Shop- https://soundcloud.com/uttenreither/hip-hop-comedy-shop

Thank you.

John

[Uttenreither]

OK, OK, Don't all answer at the same time.

[Uttenreither]

Thank you guys!

I was beginning to think it was so bad, no one wanted to answer.
The Seinfeld theme was the reference track for the listing, so I'm glad you both thought of it when listening to the my track. I wanted to create something more contemporary though.
I think the track is still missing something but I just didn't know what. I think the points you both make are great. It's good to get your perspective, I'll tweak the track with your thoughts in mind, now that I have more direction.

Thanks again Graham and Paul!

John