Contemporary trap forward

[JoeCurran]

Hi

Got this one forwarded for the listing S200127UB

https://soundcloud.com/user-999855695-2 ... ou-mst-z-2

The following ones didn't get past, No issues with the reasons just wanted to out them up in case some of you guys just getting into this style find it useful.

https://soundcloud.com/user-999855695-2 ... xd-mst-z-1

I think you could improve this song by/
Overall, the bed / underscore but a bit repetitive and could use more top melody and a stronger B section or chord progression change.

I returned or forwarded this song because/
Needs a stronger B section and stronger melody.


https://soundcloud.com/user-999855695-2 ... t-mst1-wav

I think you could improve this song by
The top melody is a bit too busy and the sounds need to be more contemporary. Could use a stronger B section.

[JoeCurran]

Thanks tom

finally making a bit of ground with this style.

joe

[MRasmussen]

Great track!

Michael

[JoeCurran]

Thanks Michael.