Country returns

jjktunes · Post by **jjktunes** » Wed Sep 30, 2009 12:29 pm

I'm ok with another batch of returns, but it just blows my mind at the inconsistency of the listeners reviews. Everybody that I have asked on the forum agree that "The Undertow" should be listed in the contemporary listings, I agree 100%.And what does this mean "I song feels to me like the "notes"for the song you have yet to write" Listing # S090910COhttp://www.taximusic.com/song.php?song_id=2529 ... =trueTitle: The Undertow / acoustic (10=best) 8 Melody 7 Lyrics 8 Marketability 8 Song Structure 7 Production 8 Engineering 8 Musicianship 8 Lead VocalGood idea. Feels a bit on the "dated" side and is not contemporary as asked for in the listing. the lyrics feels like a series of statements, rather than a conversational lyric. I song feels to me like the "notes"for the song you have yet to write.Status: Forward ReturnTitle: One Minute / acoustichttp://www.taximusic.com/song.php?song_id=252990&stream=true 8 Melody 8 Lyrics 8 Marketability 8 Song Structure 7 Production 8 Engineering 9 Musicianship 9 Lead VocalStrong effort. Good use of conversational lyrics, they set up the images very well. The last section slips into a bit too preachy, I would suggest a rewrite of that section.Status: Forward ReturnStyle On target for this listing Hard to classify Not close enough to what listing asked for Not "current" sounding Style not consistent enough from song to song for an artist pitchListing ays, " Contemporary country ala Brooks and Dunn, powerful , emotional , visual lyrics, hooks, top notch demos, etc.Overall CommentsHello James. you are doing some very good workStay conversational, and strive for originality. I feel the songs are both miscast for this act. Demos have become very important in todays world. This is not a Taxi thing, it is what the producers are requesting . So the best demos you produce can goo a long ways. "One minute" is a producers dream , I think, buts needs to be spelled out a bit better to them. You have the chops for sure, keep up the good work. Good luckBio CommentsN/aThe main reason(s) you were or were not forwarded for this listing is:The songs do not meet the criteria set by the listing. The songs are miscast for this listing.Listener ID # 278

cameron · Post by **cameron** » Wed Sep 30, 2009 1:43 pm

Don't feel bad. None of the songs I've had published in Nashville ever got a Taxi forward. You'll have to go there yourself if you want to get anywhere. One Minute is good enough.Cam

claire · Post by **claire** » Wed Sep 30, 2009 1:43 pm

If you were submitting for Brooks & Dunn, I'm surprised Taxi kept that listing up. Another website discontinued their B&D listing when the group announced they were breaking up and I didn't submit anything for the Taxi listing because I assumed they were not forwarding songs for a group that wasn't going to be recording new material.I agree that "One Minute" has got the country market in its sights - don't stop pitching that one, it's on target for sure.Claire

claire · Post by **claire** » Wed Sep 30, 2009 1:44 pm

If you were submitting for Brooks & Dunn, I'm surprised Taxi kept that listing up. Another website discontinued their B&D listing when the group announced they were breaking up and I didn't submit anything for the Taxi listing because I assumed they were not forwarding songs for a group that wasn't going to be recording new material.I agree that "One Minute" has got the country market in its sights - don't stop pitching that one, it's on target for sure.Claire

claire · Post by **claire** » Wed Sep 30, 2009 1:45 pm

didn't mean to post twice - something hiccuped!Claire

claire · Post by **claire** » Wed Sep 30, 2009 1:45 pm

well for heaven sake...c

jjktunes · Post by **jjktunes** » Wed Sep 30, 2009 2:26 pm

Thanks guys. Claire do you have Mel Tilis computer?

cameron · Post by **cameron** » Wed Sep 30, 2009 4:02 pm

FYI, you can delete your own duplicates, Claire. If you're logged in there is a little "delete" link in the upper right corner of your posts.Cam

marcblack30 · Post by **marcblack30** » Wed Sep 30, 2009 4:56 pm

"In Just One Minute" sounds like a cut to me, I could totally hear it on the radio!Doesn't sound like a great fit for B&D but it does sound like a great fit for someone down there in Nashville!I enjoyed both tunes!

bucyboy · Post by **bucyboy** » Thu Oct 01, 2009 2:58 am

I really don't think Taxi is the place for getting country forwards, let alone cuts. I had a return to the same listing as Jay with "Roses For No Reason". The screener said, "WOW, very very close." He went on to say that "You are knocking on the door of the top ten and in competition with the top songwriters for a super star act, so very close is not bad at all. Keep looking for other listings, this is well done"What gets me, if it really is that very very close, why doesn't the reviewer or someone at Taxi, who supposedly wants a country forward/cut as bad as the writers do, with all their contacts, why don't they say hey, here's what you need to do to make this a hit and here's who can help you do it? I think Taxi is fantastic for TV and film, but I don't think it's the place for country writers. I think you need to either move to Nashville or at least travel to Nashville and meet with publishers who can shop the material for you. Although I won't renew my membership, I have met a lot of great people on here, and I can still pop in and see what everyone is doing.Bucwww.taxi.com/bucwilliams

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