Critique Wanted for Song Genre and any Good Advice

[TerryD]

song url: www.taxi.com/terrybdavis

JUST ONE

WE’VE TALKED ABOUT IT
YOU SAID OUR LOVE IS NOT A SIN
THAT YOU WOULD WAIT FOR ME
VERSE AND BE THERE IN THE END
BUT I JUST CAN’T TURN EMOTIONS ON
AS OTHERS I KNOW CAN
OR LET YOU IN THE DOOR
WHILE MAKING OTHER PLANS

CAUSE I CAN ONLY LOVE, JUST ONE
IS IT SO HARD TO UNDERSTAND
CHORUS YES I CAN LOVE, JUST ONE
I GAVE OUR LOVE A CHANCE
I CAN ONLY LOVE JUST ONE
I’M A ONE WOMAN MAN

I CAN’T GO OUT ON THE TOWN
AND PRETEND TO BE ALONE
WITH NO PICTURES IN MY WALLET
VERSE AND, I KNOW THAT SHE’S AT HOME
AND WHO WOULD I BE FOOLIN’
NOBODY BUT MYSELF
WHEN IT ALL COMES DOWN
I CAN’T LOVE NOBODY ELSE

CAUSE I CAN ONLY LOVE, JUST ONE
IS IT SO HARD TO UNDERSTAND
CHORUS YES I CAN LOVE, JUST ONE
I GAVE OUR LOVE A CHANCE
I CAN ONLY LOVE, JUST ONE
I’M A ONE WOMAN MAN

IN THE WORLD OUT THERE
THERE’S SO MUCH TO SEE
SOME WANT TO HAVE IT ALL
BRIDGE AND SET THEIR SOUL FREE
BUT WHEN IT’S ALL SAID AND DONE
I KNOW IN MY HEART I’VE GOT TO CHOOSE,
JUST ONE

I WON’T MAKE DATES,
TO SEE YOU ON THE SIDE
VERSE OR LET YOU KNOW
IF SOMETHING STARTS TO SLIDE
AND WHEN I LOOK INTO YOUR EYES
I SEE THE PROMISE THAT YOU BRING
BUT THE HURT INSIDE
JUST ISN’T WORTH A FLING
CHORUS 2X


WORDS AND MUSIC: TERRY DAVIS (510) 375-4566;
TERRYDAVIS510@HOTMAIL.COM
©2011 COPYRIGHT

[Len911]

Terry, the song is not on your taxi page, there aren't any songs there. The song appears young pop. The format is a little confusing, I had to study the word "verse" the first time I saw it because I thought it was a word in the song, that's my good advice.