Critiques please...

[Vadik]

Hi, Can I please get some comments and critiques???

http://www.box.net/shared/z9jil5xvd1

Thanks

[jefflaplante]

I like it. It is very trance like. I don't really think the melodies are very memorable, however. I think the sounds you are using are great, the production is good, and you mixed it well. I would work on the melody lines to make them more appealing and less repetitive. I loved the middle sections with just the arpeggio and drum hits. Really cool stuff.

[heckxx]

Pretty cool song, it has a nice ambiance/atmosphere to it. Usually when I listen to songs like this, I will hear a few elements that stick out in a bad way, and I don't hear that at all here. The melodies and rhythms are all great! But this song does feel a bit on the background-music side, there doesn't seem to be too much that's memorable. Great music though!

-Jeff

[Vadik]

Hey guys,
Thanks for you feedback... I agree, it is a bit repetitive and missing either a vocal or a melody to piece it all together. That is the hard part though... lol I guess now that I'm much better in mixing I can work on a melody part. I do have to agree though, it will make a decent background music but nothing more... So we'll see how it will work out...

Thanks again, much appreciated!!!