Dave wanted to know...

[jimmys]

Hi everyone The last time I was on I was just stoping in to say hello being I was a new on this forum. You all welcome me with open hearts and in one of the replays, Dave wanted to know what kind of music I like to do. Well' I got a little taste of it now so you all can here and let me know what you think. I am just messing around on this track so if you think it sound OK, I might take it a little further and polish it up. Thanks for the interest and will be chatting at you all later.Jimmy Song name is ( song #8 ) can't miss it. www.myspace.com/jimmysband1

[jeffe]

Not bad considering the few instruments used. Not sure what sort of listing you'd put it up for, and I'm not sure it would pass through. It's a good tune but doesn't have any memorable parts in it. I noticed timing issues when you played the guitar fast. That can be alright in some songs, but it seemed unnatural in this one.You said you were messing around so I assume it's not complete. It could be built into a good rocking number, but I think you need to put a little more variation in there, and maybe some good hooks, but you probably already know that