Father/Daughter Feedback Wanted

[MelleMelCreations]

Trying Something New here, Hoping its hitting near the right areas. My Concern is the listing wanted Southern..... and it kinda changed lanes on me. Anyways let me know what you think.


Here's the listing text
QUOTING THE FILM'S PRODUCER: "This is for a Faith Based Feature Film set in the South, and we're looking for a thematic match to the reference about a father/daughter and time slipping away. Songs should have similar instrumentation, style, and tempo."

NOTE: Since this is a Faith-based Film, we think lyrics that incorporate faith-based themes or ideas could potentially work here, but they are not required!

Please submit well-crafted Contemporary Christian or Adult Contemporary Songs with a sentimental sound and lyrical themes about a Father/Daughter relationship! This Film Producer is looking for songs that capture the honest, heartfelt, and tear-jerking lyrics that showcase a father's love. They're also looking for an element that references ideas such as time slipping away, life moving quickly, a daughter becoming independent, never missing a moment, etc.

Emotionally-impactful choruses, solid arrangements, engaging rhythms, and expressive, well-performed Male vocals are all needed for this request. Instrumentation and production in the general wheelhouse of the reference will suit your submissions best, such as acoustic guitar, piano, drums, bass, strings, etc. Please ensure any virtual instruments or samples you use are high-quality and very realistic. Vocal performances with an emotionally captivating delivery will go a long way here!


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[dtrain1986]

I really like the melody and the vocals! Is that you singing and playing the instruments? I was going to try one for this listing but I saw the listing too late. The bridge seems a bit too rushed, maybe slow down a little there. Other than that, I think the song sounds really good! Can I send you a message?

[MelleMelCreations]

Sure you can message me.

[MelleMelCreations]

I really like the melody and the vocals! Is that you singing and playing the instruments? I was going to try one for this listing but I saw the listing too late. The bridge seems a bit too rushed, maybe slow down a little there. Other than that, I think the song sounds really good! Can I send you a message?

Yeah I did it all...I didn't want to sing but didn't have time to find anyone soooo there you go lol. I've only done instrumentals up to this point.

Thank you I appreciate your feedback.

Sure you can message me.