Feedback I'd Be Free

[arkjack]

This is my latest effort, not yet targeted to a listing. Would appreciate any feedback.http://www.taximusic.com/song.php?song_ ... Production - are the guitars to strong? How would you EQ it?overall song, lyric, progression, melodymusicianship on instruments, vocals.What genre, targets for listings?Thanks in advance for any helpArkJack

[geo]

Hey Arkjack, here we go:Production - like the guitars though you might want to tweak the lead sound a bit (maybe cut/boost midrange frequency?) think the over all mix is good, but the piano/keyboard needs to come up a bit.Overall - seems a touch long (4:44) maybe if you vary the sections a bit more, maybe break down for the chorus, build back up for the verse or vis-versa. It will also help the chorus stand out more.Lyric - "free as the wind blows" and "free as an eagle" you might want to try some other imagery here, something a little "fresher".Musicianship - vocals seem a little shaky (still much better than me though ) but the instrument playing is pretty solid.Genre/listing - _______________________ I got nothing, I'm frequently wrong so I'll leave this alone.It's a good start, I would try and trim 1 minute or so and strengthen the chorus a bit.... Thanks in advance for any helpArkJackYour welcome, Geo