Feedback on Dreamy IndieAlt Pop Song

[lizzystunes]

Hi everyone! First time I've done one like this - would love some feedback on whether it fits the listing, mix, vocals - anything is helpful! The listing is S230321YK : https://www.taxi.com/industry#listing-S230321YK


And here is my tune! https://www.taxi.com/members/07BdLLQ4TQ ... -direction

Thanks in advance

[eandersonmusic]

Great song! Love the way it all comes together at the chorus, nice dynamics and very intriguing overall. Listening on my phone, but I feel the main repeating guitar idea/lick is a little too loud.. just a touch. It's certainly louder than the other/alternate (less repeating) guitar idea, which is fine and may be intentional, but possibly just bring them in a little closer to each other.
Love the mood/feel of this track!
Erik