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Feedback on instrumental..

Post by chriswattsuk » Wed Jan 25, 2017 2:43 pm

Hi fellow Taxiers!

I'm really keen to get some opinions on my latest instrumental if possible. Anything from mood evoked, suitability/potential uses, production, how it comes across on your sound system - anything too loud quiet etc?! :)

https://soundcloud.com/chris_watts_uk/s ... strumental

If you are able to check it out it'd be awesome to hear from you.

PS - I'm tempted to submit it to this listing, but not sure if it's a good fit - the first two ALAs have vocals, but final ALA has no lyrics, and could be found on the same playlist I reckon? :roll: Anyway, let me have your thoughts!

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Re: Feedback on instrumental..

Post by Uttenreither » Thu Jan 26, 2017 8:07 pm

Hi Chris,
Sorry to be blunt but I need to be quick.
The intro could be shorter, 8-12 seconds would be good.
The dueling guitars for the fist half of the song was distracting to me. Sorry could be just me
I think the 2nd half of the track is great. I would rework that into the required length.
Great advice from Graham above and he is a better person to take advise from than me.
John

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Re: Feedback on instrumental..

Post by chriswattsuk » Sat Jan 28, 2017 9:07 am

As always, such fantastic and useful feedback, thanks so much guys. I've made some tweaks, predominantly shortening the intro. Here is an alternative version - still has the verse section which takes a step back in order to set up the final chorus, I considered shortening the verse bars, but I think it needs to be the length it is in order to build to the final chorus..?

https://soundcloud.com/chris_watts_uk/t ... umental-v2

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