Feedback on Suspense/Tension cues

[jhwk101]

Hi all, first time here...would love some feedback on my track for the “Suspenseful, Investigative Cues”.

https://soundcloud.com/jhwk101/mysterya ... TuVx4Mbykv

TAXI # S210328VS
SUSPENSEFUL, INVESTIGATIVE TENSION INSTRUMENTAL CUES are needed by a high-quality, boutique-sized Music Licensing Company that’s been signing quite a bit of music from TAXI members lately! This company offers up-front payments!
NOTE: This Company would love to add more female composers to their team, so women are strongly encouraged to submit! Obviously, they're happy to hear great tracks from men, as well!
This Company is looking for Instrumental Cues in the general stylistic range of the following references:
"Vacation Days" by Thomas Newman
"Investigation (Connor)" by Nima Fakhrara
"The Birds Are Doing That" by Cliff Martinez
Quoting the Company: "We're looking for Investigative, Suspense, Anticipation (NOT horror) Cues with a mix of organic and electronic elements. The pieces must have a modern feel – nothing dated-sounding."

[Zaychi]

Now this may be very personal, but it doesn't have an "investigative tension" feel for me... more like soul-searching, tormented, being misunderstood or alone... I think it is about the piano and the chord progression of it.

Overall sound seems pretty good, but don't trust my judgement on that!

[superkons]

Have to agree with zaychi

[jhwk101]

Thanks so much for the listen and the feedback zaychi and superkons! Really appreciate it.