First Submission Feedback

[glennlavender]

Was great to get to know so many Taxi members over the weekend and learn about all the resources I didn't even realize were available to us. This being one of them!

My first submission is for the listing S211111AP

MODERN ALT-POP SONGS with Male or Female Vocals are needed by a Music Licensing Company that specializes in music for content creators as well as TV shows and Film projects!
This Company is searching for Mid-to-Up-Tempo Songs that could be found on a playlist with the following references we got directly from them:

"Therefore I Am" by Billie Eilish
"Nothing Quite Like It" by Danger Twins
"bad guy" by Billie Eilish
"Thing of Beauty" by Danger Twins

I had already started working on a song using "Therefore I Am" as a reference so I was glad to see this brief come up! Here's a link to our track. Mostly looking for any feedback regarding the mix/master but open to hearing other suggestions too. Thanks!!
https://soundcloud.com/user-101028135/nothing-to-prove

Glenn

[karafinman]

It's too soft. In fact, I can't hear it at all.

[MichaelReschke]

Hey Glenn,

Nice chatting with you this past weekend! Your track doesn't seem to be there on Soundcloud.

Michael

[glennlavender]

Was great to get to know so many Taxi members over the weekend and learn about all the resources I didn't even realize were available to us. This being one of them!

My first submission is for the listing S211111AP

MODERN ALT-POP SONGS with Male or Female Vocals are needed by a Music Licensing Company that specializes in music for content creators as well as TV shows and Film projects!
This Company is searching for Mid-to-Up-Tempo Songs that could be found on a playlist with the following references we got directly from them:

"Therefore I Am" by Billie Eilish
"Nothing Quite Like It" by Danger Twins
"bad guy" by Billie Eilish
"Thing of Beauty" by Danger Twins

I had already started working on a song using "Therefore I Am" as a reference so I was glad to see this brief come up! Here's a link to our track. Mostly looking for any feedback regarding the mix/master but open to hearing other suggestions too. Thanks!!
https://soundcloud.com/user-101028135/n ... afddcf734c

***New link*** Not sure what happened with my previous link.

Glenn

[AlanHall]

Glenn, Wow! If you told me that you got Billie for the track, I'd believe it!

I especially like the line "Showing you the door" (slam). Along with that thought, the transition into chorus 2 seems stronger than the transition into chorus 1. It feels to me as if chorus 1 isn't being set up properly, the music drops a bit at the end of the verse, but the chorus doesn't hit with a bang the way chorus 2 does. Maybe add the same background vocals to "smack" into both choruses? IDK. Other than that, I think the mix works. Thanks for sharing!

[KennyWayneBuffalo]

Hey, that sounds really good to me. I'm not a huge Billie fan, but I've heard her stuff and I think this is pretty close, maybe not as strange (hopefully a good thing).