Flip Flop (Oldies style lyrics) *duet* new changes

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Flip Flop (Oldies style lyrics) *duet* new changes

Post by southern0077 » Sun Mar 15, 2009 11:56 am

Male vocalI look in your warm smiling eyesmore beautiful than star filled skiesoh darlin no matter how hard I tryoh babyMy heart won't stop doing the flip flopmy heart goes flipity flop bop de bop--- bop bop my heart can't stop doing the flip flopFemale vocalYou whisper sweet words in my earI'll always love you thru the yearsOh darlin even thru my tears oh honeymy heart won't stop doing the flip flopmy heart goes flipity flopbop de bop--- bop bop my heart can't stop doing the flip flop Male/female vocalAs the years have passed bywith you still by my sideOh darlin I now came to realize oh babyour hearts won't stop doing the flip flopour hearts goes flipty flopbop de bop--- bop bopour hearts can't stopdoing the flip flop flipity flop bop de bop--- bop bopour hearts ain't gonna stop doing the flip flopfade*our hearts ain't gonna stopdoing the flip flop bop de bop--- bop bophearts ain't gonna stopdoing the flip flop© Copyright 2009

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Re: Flip Flop (Oldies style lyrics) *duet* new cha

Post by deantaylor » Mon Mar 16, 2009 9:05 pm

Southern,It's a very simple lyric, which is not a bad thing. There is a nice rythm to the words. Good to see a duet! I like it. It would probably make a fun, catchy little song. Maybe a bridge would be nice? Between the female and male/female sections.Dean

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Post by southern0077 » Tue Mar 24, 2009 6:34 pm

I see what ya mean. a bridge will do some good. The song drags after the last verse. Thank you for the advice.

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Re: Flip Flop (Oldies style lyrics) *duet* new cha

Post by willied » Thu Mar 26, 2009 4:17 am

Southern I like the lyrics sounds like a nice duet. After reading it this verse popped into my mind.All and all very good songIf I could do it all againI'd do it all againWith you by my side

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