FORWARD TO A MULTI-PLATINUM PRODUCER #S170801SS

[LyricsMatter]

Wow, Tom...thank you!

So appreciative of (and humbled by) your kind words.

You rock!

Trisha

[LyricsMatter]

Thank you, NoizeeBhoy!

Super kind words! It was definitely my intention to take a less is more approach with this particular lyric and I think Chris did a great job capturing my vision for this song. So glad you like our effort.

All the best!

Trisha

[sansharbour]

If you can play a complete song on just one instrument especially one where both the instrument, melody and lyrics are strong then Bingo you have a great tune

Well done, sounds terrific

Don

[Tunesmith]

Very nice song! How you compliment each other in your work is wonderful! Congratulations! Wishing you the best with your song!

Linda C

[LyricsMatter]

If you can play a complete song on just one instrument especially one where both the instrument, melody and lyrics are strong then Bingo you have a great tune

Well done, sounds terrific

Don

Thank you, Don! Very much appreciated!

[LyricsMatter]

Very nice song! How you compliment each other in your work is wonderful! Congratulations! Wishing you the best with your song!

Linda C

Thank you, Linda! Chris and I really appreciate your thoughtful words!

[Alasdair]

Well done.. lovely work

[LyricsMatter]

Kind thanks, Alasdair!

So glad you enjoyed listening!

Trisha

[melodymessiah]

love the guitar theme, but i would have made a variation on two of the notes. also i would have cut out the part between 00.30 and 00:50 (and respectively so on the second verse) as i see this as just a weaker variation on the part before it. and at 4.31 the song is too long imo, so it would benefit double with the cutting. i would also have started the chorus on a long, high note. and what about changing the title to "black and blue"? wish you the best of luck with it.

[LyricsMatter]

Hi Paul, aka melodymessiah!

Thank you for the detailed feedback, much appreciated. I’ll ponder your suggestions while I prepare for the worst and hope for the best as the strongest Atlantic hurricane ever recorded makes its way to my little corner of the world.

All the best!

Trisha