Gonna Get Hot (alt-country)

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Gonna Get Hot (alt-country)

Post by mikeShort » Tue Jun 11, 2013 8:18 pm

About a year ago, I posted lyrics for Gonna Get Hot. Here's what my band's version sounds like:

https://soundcloud.com/mike-short-2/01-gonna-get-hot

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Re: Gonna Get Hot (alt-country)

Post by nylyrics » Fri Jun 14, 2013 9:35 pm

Mike:

Alright this is the first I've heard of this or read the lyrics. (no earlier versions or comments)

Here is what i like:

Title hook
2:43 on it gets in a zone that the title demands not sure i am big on the verses but the hook is hot
I kind of feel that i want the rhyme aught to be changed to pure got hot etc shot

I am just commenting on overall vibe. The vibe is better in the latter part of the song and i think with a little work
on the verse content and story line you can work this title into something very strong.

Good luck

A

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