Gotta Be Good Looking to Be Bad

[jchitty]

Although this song has been given some good marks by the screeners, it just doesn't quite clear the Nashville high bar. I've learned not complain about the screeners, this isn't about that....it's just about improving this song. I have taken some of the screener's suggestions to heart, and I will use them if I do redemo this song.I'd appreciate any feedback that folks on this board could give me about it. I'm not a musician, so I don't give the greatest critiques myself, but I really value the critical thought here as well as the TAXI screener's comments. I like to get all kinds of feedback, brutal, kind or otherwise, hehe. Anyway, the song is called "Gotta Be Good Looking To Be Bad" and it's what I'd call rocking commercial country....nothing profound, just good time music. Here's the link to it:http://www.taximusic.com/hosting/home.p ... d=2572Here are the words:Well, everywhere you go Your presence parts the wavesThe preacher man gets all tongue tiedAnd forgets that Jesus savesWith looks like that You drive 'em wildGot away with murderSince you were a childAnd you gotta be good looking to be badWell, you gotta be good lookingTo be badYeah, you gotta be good looking To be badWell, I learned a lesson long agoAnd to some, it might seem sadBut you gotta be good lookingTo be badYou got a speeding ticketJust the other day'Ole Smokey pulled you overAnd took one look at your faceYou flashed your pearly whitesAnd hair of goldHe tore the ticket up And let you goAnd you gotta be good looking to be badWell, you gotta be good looking to be badYeah, you gotta be good looking to be badWhile all the plain folks mind their P's and Q'sAw, nothing seems to stick to youAnd you gotta be good looking to be badDaddy left my Momma when I was only threeI didn't get Daddy's looksYou could say I fellJust shy of the ugly treeMomma said I hadA real good heartBut there was something I should know from the very startThat you gotta be good looking to be badRepeat chorus