Point taken Tom, so I beg you please not to be "sorry" for making it clear to me because I don't want to be fooling myself. Feel free to tell me as it is anytime and all times.CTWF wrote: ↑Sat Aug 01, 2020 8:35 amHi Irwin - it's me again!
To make my point very clear: If the song went like this to Heather Rachel (or another singer) and you would tell her "just do it", then it would become a non-melodic, not commercially usable idiosyncratic piece, because I can hear no melody whatsoever in it. Sorry to have to be so clear about this.
I like this. Another good idea.CTWF wrote: ↑Sat Aug 01, 2020 8:35 am
So, I am absolutely dead serious: Take your beat (without your vocals) and put in an instrument that plays the topline and post it again here. I am sure experienced members will then be happy to tell you how strong the melody is and how well it fits into any given genre. Then you can improve the melody step by step.
I do respect what you wrote/said above here but in my own little mind I would say sometimes.
I cherish this opportunity to be guided by you.