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[deantaylor]

deleted post. thanks for your feedback. we got what we needed.

[BradleyHagen]

A few nitpicky things if I could.....

1.) vocals are pretty good, but a tad pitchy in certain spots...usually the end of a phrase.... maybe tighten that up a little bit - The doubles don't bother me though
2.) Maybe a little more vocal harmony in the choruses?
3.) I hate the vinyl thing at the end...sorry!
4.) Needs a better buttoned ending.... I am not very good at this either, so take that with a grain of salt - Matt VB is the authority on buttoned stinger endings on here though....maybe he can chime in
5.) Maybe others are far better suited to make this comment, but lyrics abut specific teams, McDonalds, etc...Isn't that a major no no in sync music??

Alot to like here though....I really enjoyed the guitar solo! You don't hear many of those (at least played well) these days! Drums were pretty good, bass lines were just fine, LOVED the piano........ nice track!