I'm Hurt: CLOSED (no more critiques please)
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Hi Dorothy,
I did mean Dylan (aint dark yet but it's getting there) but agree there is also a Jonny Cash HURT vibe as well, great song too! Both have a really worldy wise vocal.
Mellow
I did mean Dylan (aint dark yet but it's getting there) but agree there is also a Jonny Cash HURT vibe as well, great song too! Both have a really worldy wise vocal.
Mellow
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Dorothy:
I thought this really well done. Lyrics are excellent, I liked the voice, and I thought the last minute or so changed things up in a very positive way. You should be proud of this one.
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I thought this really well done. Lyrics are excellent, I liked the voice, and I thought the last minute or so changed things up in a very positive way. You should be proud of this one.
Ott
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Ott,
I just uploaded the vocal preview from the studio yesterday. You must have listened to that. She has a great voice.
Thanks for the kind words.
Dorothy
I just uploaded the vocal preview from the studio yesterday. You must have listened to that. She has a great voice.
Thanks for the kind words.
Dorothy
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Wow, that's coming along nicely 

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Thanks! I can't wait to hear the final mix.
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Dorothy,
Really like this.......still would like that chorus to come in before the one minute mark........the "I'm Hurt" really gets into the heart of the lyrics....
Regards,
Dick
Really like this.......still would like that chorus to come in before the one minute mark........the "I'm Hurt" really gets into the heart of the lyrics....
Regards,
Dick
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The chorus is coming in at :56. Not sure what version you listened to. It must have had some space at the beginning, but I have the 1st Master up now.
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Re: I'm Hurt: CLOSED (no more critiques please)
I agree sounds really good man!
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