I'm Hurt: CLOSED (no more critiques please)

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Re: I'm Hurt

Post by Mellow D » Tue Apr 27, 2010 9:41 am

Hi Dorothy,

I did mean Dylan (aint dark yet but it's getting there) but agree there is also a Jonny Cash HURT vibe as well, great song too! Both have a really worldy wise vocal.

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Re: I'm Hurt

Post by ottlukk » Tue Apr 27, 2010 7:41 pm

Dorothy:
I thought this really well done. Lyrics are excellent, I liked the voice, and I thought the last minute or so changed things up in a very positive way. You should be proud of this one.
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Re: I'm Hurt

Post by DorothyWallace » Wed Apr 28, 2010 10:59 am

Ott,

I just uploaded the vocal preview from the studio yesterday. You must have listened to that. She has a great voice.

Thanks for the kind words.

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Re: I'm Hurt

Post by glender » Wed Apr 28, 2010 11:48 am

Wow, that's coming along nicely :P

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Re: I'm Hurt

Post by DorothyWallace » Wed Apr 28, 2010 11:59 am

Thanks! I can't wait to hear the final mix.

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Re: I'm Hurt

Post by slowdance » Wed Apr 28, 2010 4:51 pm

Dorothy,

Really like this.......still would like that chorus to come in before the one minute mark........the "I'm Hurt" really gets into the heart of the lyrics....

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Re: I'm Hurt

Post by DorothyWallace » Thu Apr 29, 2010 6:07 am

The chorus is coming in at :56. Not sure what version you listened to. It must have had some space at the beginning, but I have the 1st Master up now.

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Re: I'm Hurt: CLOSED (no more critiques please)

Post by Mellow D » Fri Apr 30, 2010 10:59 am

I agree sounds really good man!

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