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I'm new ! Please review. New style metal

Post by sounddesign3 » Sat Dec 16, 2006 7:10 am

Im getting ready to get past production and record this tune for real. Let me know what you think of the direction i'm going.Go to www.broadjam.com/Linear The song Title is: BlissThanks again

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Post by arkjack » Sat Dec 16, 2006 8:17 am

Hey SD3... that track already sounds great... I couldn't get all your lyrics, and thus the message of the song was lost in the vocal diction.... but I really think the rap hip hop- feel in the vocal delivery against the metal rock was definitely cool and sounded fresh to me.... I found rap hard to like (except maybe Kanye West),... but the changes from the guitar solos and music going on in the background like I said sounds unique and fresh to me and makes it interesting music...... I think you're on a good track.BTW thank you for the comments on Ramblin Road.... I am working on those vocals. Welcome to the forumArkJack

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Re: I'm new ! Please review. New style metal

Post by sounddesign3 » Sat Dec 16, 2006 10:15 am

Thanks For the input! I was never into rap either, so this is kinda new. It just turned out like that because its the only vocal style I can do. Singers in my town are few and far between.SD3

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Re: I'm new ! Please review. New style metal

Post by gitarrero » Sat Dec 16, 2006 1:45 pm

hi sd,If I go to your broadjam page, the songs won't start playing - am I the only one with that problem.,.?
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Post by sounddesign3 » Sat Dec 16, 2006 1:46 pm

Try again ! I haven't had any probs

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Post by nomiyah » Sat Dec 16, 2006 10:15 pm

I like the sound you have in this track. The drums and guitars are locked in well. The guitar tone works good. The mix needs work, it's really hard to hear the lyrics. Care to post them? I like the hard edge, has a lot of energy. Cool chord changes.Nomi

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Post by gitarrero » Sun Dec 17, 2006 12:43 am

ok, Now the link works.spontaneous critique ("bliss"):- timing difference in the beginning- mix sounds thin - cool guitar riffs- timing problems in the middle part starting at about 1:20- the vocals seems to be secondary - It sounds like a piece of guitar music and some put some vocals over it. I miss a hookline in the vocals.hope that helps in any way;)cheers,Martin
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Post by johnnydean1 » Sun Dec 17, 2006 4:09 am

Serious Solo Geetar intonation problems at 2.15 not helped by the WOW effect.Not bad of it's type but can't help thinking of "Rage"who were the masters!Nonetheless this is the season to be jolly tra la la la la etc

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Post by sounddesign3 » Sun Dec 17, 2006 6:07 am

Crazy! good ear from gitarrero. The music has been around without vox for a long time. My guiatr sucks, I'm hoping someone els will do the solo stuff. This is realy cool, thanks guys!

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Post by johnnydean1 » Sun Dec 17, 2006 6:37 am

Quote:Crazy! good ear from gitarrero. The music has been around without vox for a long time. My guiatr sucks, I'm hoping someone els will do the solo stuff. This is realy cool, thanks guys!Some of us (divvys ) could learn from "your" attitude.J

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