I sprained my ankle this morning

[bitwhys]

No, that's not the name of the song. It actually happened so I got a few hours to myself to finish writing the one on the blocks. Kind of explains why I haven't finished recording the other one I got posted here. Decided to post this new one by way of apology to Matt for not getting my homework done.Just wanted to share more than anything else though. Hope you enjoy.Also no, I have absolutely no idea why I'm writing a wedding song. Travis style picking with some really nice runs to it. Don't do that very much. Usually just bang on it.New Old Blue Borrowed© Brian Dondo 2004Let's not worry 'bout the way that things are meant to changewe can deal with that tomorrowAll we need is hope that love will always find a wayNew Old Blue BorrowedNew Old Blue BorrowedPerhaps its true that this is simply how its meant to bemore than we'll ever knowNow the time has come to say "forevermore"I love you soNew Old Blue BorrowedNew Old Blue BorrowedNew Old Blue BorrowedTime will tell the taleif fortune smiles upon us or if we suffer other fatesWe will never failand in the days that followfrom today into tomorrowwe'll bring some luck of our ownNew Old Blue BorrowedNew Old Blue BorrowedAll we need is hope that love will always find a wayI love you soI love you so

[bitwhys]

Hi folks,My ankle's all better except for the odd shade of purple. Just to let passers-by know I finished a demo of the tune. It can be found on...my IC song page...if anyone cares to have a listen. I should quit stalling and cap off that other one but this was easier.gotta catch a bus,b

[bitwhys]

Review of Song: New Old Blue BorrowedGeneral OverviewDo you listen to this genre on a regular basis? YesWhat Genre is most appropriate for this song? LatinWhat is an appropriate title for this song? Song AnalysisDoes this song have market potential? 2/5Quality of Lyrics 2/5Originality of Song 1/5Quality of the Hook 1/5Quality of Instrumentation 3/5Quality of Arrangement 3/5Would you like to hear more from this artist? 2/5InstrumentationQuality of Vocal Pitch 4/5ProductionQuality of Recording 4/5Overall Rating 2/5Positive CommentsConstructive Comments Reviewer StatsState: FloridaCountry: United StatesGender: MaleAge: 46MusicianTalents:Song Writer

[bitwhys]

These are the Broadjam reviews, btw. No comments, just the facts, ma'am. +++++++++++++++++++++ Review of Song: New Old Blue BorrowedGeneral OverviewDo you listen to this genre on a regular basis? YesWhat Genre is most appropriate for this song? BluesWhat is an appropriate title for this song? I've been cryingSong AnalysisDoes this song have market potential? 3/5Quality of Lyrics 3/5Originality of Song 3/5Quality of the Hook 3/5Quality of Instrumentation 4/5Quality of Arrangement 3/5Would you like to hear more from this artist? 2/5InstrumentationQuality of Vocal Pitch 3/5ProductionQuality of Recording 3/5Overall Rating 3/5Positive CommentsVery emotive and laid back song with some good arrangements and feel. Good background music.Constructive CommentsKick drum seems a bit too far in front in the mix. Vocals hit the note but need softening in part Reviewer StatsState: (Non USA/Not Applicable)Country: AustraliaGender: MaleAge: 36Live PerformerTalents:Song Writer

[matto]

Quote:These are the Broadjam reviews, btw. No comments, just the facts, ma'am.Oh okay, that clarifies it...I thought you had gone off the deep end and were reviewing you own song !

[bitwhys]

Quote:Oh okay, that clarifies it...I thought you had gone off the deep end and were reviewing you own song !LOLno of course not. I would NEVER have thought of it as a Latin number!mind you if I ever get the timing down good enough for a click track I'll have to check it out. its all in how you look at it, I guess.Kick Drum? (ok ok, I promised "no comments" so I'll shut up now.)I'll post #3 if and when it comes in. My last tune only got reviewed twice. * shrug * roll with the punches wonder when she's gonna move this thing

[bitwhys]

just in...**********************Review of Song: New Old Blue BorrowedGeneral OverviewDo you listen to this genre on a regular basis? YesWhat Genre is most appropriate for this song? FolkSong AnalysisOriginality of Song 1/5Does this song invoke an emotion? 1/5Would you like to hear more from this artist? 1/5Would you recommend this song to a friend? 1/5ProductionOverall Rating 1/5General Comments Reviewer StatsState:Country:Gender: MaleAge: 29Non Musician

[bitwhys]

Review of Song: New Old Blue BorrowedGeneral OverviewDo you listen to this genre on a regular basis? YesWhat Genre is most appropriate for this song? FolkWhat is an appropriate title for this song? The BorrowedSong AnalysisDoes this song have market potential? 2/5Quality of Lyrics 3/5Originality of Song 3/5Quality of the Hook 3/5Quality of Instrumentation 4/5Quality of Arrangement 3/5Would you like to hear more from this artist? 4/5InstrumentationQuality of Vocal Pitch 4/5ProductionQuality of Recording 4/5Overall Rating 3/5Positive CommentsSincere deliveryConstructive Comments *****************so there you go. figured some folks might want to compare and contrast to their own experience. that's all.respectfully,b

[bitwhys]

for the record, they tossed the straight 1's review. this one showed up in its 'stead.*****************************Review of Song: New Old Blue BorrowedGeneral OverviewDo you listen to this genre on a regular basis? YesWhat Genre is most appropriate for this song? FolkWhat is an appropriate title for this song? Song AnalysisDoes this song have market potential? 2/5Originality of Song 2/5Quality of the Hook 2/5Quality of Instrumentation 2/5Quality of Arrangement 2/5Would you like to hear more from this artist? 2/5InstrumentationQuality of Vocal Pitch 3/5ProductionQuality of Recording 2/5Overall Rating 2/5Positive CommentsConstructive Comments Reviewer StatsState: (Non USA/Not Applicable)Country: DenmarkGender: MaleAge: 38Studio MusicianTalents:Record Producer, Engineer, Music / Film, Song Writer**********************cheers all.b