i think they like me remix check out this mp3

[blwtheblue]

ok.. i'm back wit some real sh*t.. listen to this and tell me what u thinkhttp://www.blwrecords.com/music/ithinktheylikemeremix.mp3

[superflux]

The beat sounds pretty good, but the string line is weak. At least on my PC, it sounded a little thin and empty.The rap is really not compelling. Part of the problem for me is thatit's really not in the pocket most of the time. I know that it's a stylistic choice for some rappers to lie way back on the phrase, butthis just sounds out of time.I'm not a prude, and I don't mind harsh lyrics,... WHEN it has anemotional impact and moves the song along. This, however,came across as a foul mouthed kid trying to sound likea thug. Instead of creating a sense of urgency it just mademe lose interest.Just one guy's opinion who is admitttedly not an expert on the genre. Good luck,Steve