I tracked a new song-would love draft feedback

[deantaylor]

Hey Anna,Very good song. Great voice. You sing and write older than your years. Keep going .. you'll go far .. enjoy the ride ... have a happy life.DeanPS Yeah .. Trace of Light is excellent too.

[watksco]

Aug 21, 2009, 2:15pm, wta wrote:Aug 21, 2009, 2:07pm, jdhogg wrote:Is that you singing......? ULTRA Fantastic vox.I think the vox and gtr are so good I would keep it ultra bare and just add a very good upright bass player and make that busy when you want a lift here and there.You could add drums, piano shaker etc but I would not ..................this should stay haunting with a big upright bass heart beat coming in at some point, it will make it more original imho. Maybe try a few versions? Great song Anna - I'm with wta. I love it bare as is - but a different more 'up' version may also work - worth looking at.Cheers,Scott

[questor]

I really liked this tune, lots of expressive-ness in the vocals. Only thought (suggestion) was to try boosting the tempo a little bit just to see as a comparison... just a thought as the slight overall tempo boost might add a bit to the intensity of some of the lines. It is quite awesome the way it is, it's just something I would try if I was kicking the tires on a new song.Very nice work, and really nice vox.Regards,Q

[annathomas]

Thanks everyone!