I Visit Me

[inga]

Somewhere in my heart
in a part not torn apart <-------3rd word. try "bit" or "place"
I visit me,
where I still feel.


Someday I may show myself,
but first I must be healed.
What scares me
Is what me <------ " is how little there'll be"
there'll be, <------
by the time I am revealed.

Deep down within my soul
as far as I can go,
I visit me;
the me that's real.

I visit me
I visit me

(This is a marvelous set of words. You have managed to capture how most people feel once they have been put through the mill. Every generation on Earth knows exactly how this feels. And you have captured it stunningly. )