I Will.... mix comments please

[geo]

Hi guys.... redid the intro.... someone suggested that pause which I like..... all comments welcomed.... sorry I don't have lyrics..... PC is down.... just like the commercials...Peace, GeoI Will2008 Geohttp://www.taximusic.com/download/150643/I%20Will.mp3

[davekershaw]

Good work Geo!I take it you're not married then,otherwise you wouldn't be so keen to say "I Will". No mention of mother-in-laws, which is always a good thing!

[feaker]

geoWish I had just a little piece of the energy in this piece. Man! Woke me right up:)Mike sounds really good here. Should have been around when I had the rocker contest.This kicks butt bud.Nice jobpaul

[geo]

Thanks for the listen Dave & Paul.....I've written the missus 6 songs.... wrote this one 2 years after we married.... wrote the last one last month!!!Peace, Geo

[wta]

Geo, this is really cool that you wrote this to your mrs.! This song has got it all going on, I love that vocalist, is that you? My only issue is the heavy distorted guitar feels misplaced with a wedding vow kinda theme. That was my first impression, don't get me wrong they sound great it just feel a bit odd thats all. My brain thought it was going to be a piano song and all of a sudden there was this huge guitar sound... lol. Queen did a good job of combining this kinds feel with the big riffs of Brian May. Just some thoughts... wta

[heinsite]

hi geo!yeah, a split personality tune, i love both vibes, i love the high energy of this tune, and it holds it's own in very nice fashion, but what peeks my interest also is the "other" tune that hasn't been written yet...the one that starts with the entry to this one, and keeps on in that style--so you already have the rocker, i think you have the writing chops for sure to create another tune based on the "quiet" geo...just my opnion...cool tune, great job!the best,warren

[davekershaw]

Quote: My only issue is the heavy distorted guitar feels misplaced with a wedding vow kinda theme.Yeah, that bit represents the mother-in-law!

[cameron]

Nov 18, 2008, 3:30pm, geo wrote:Thanks for the listen Dave & Paul.....I've written the missus 6 songs.... wrote this one 2 years after we married.... wrote the last one last month!!!Peace, GeoDo you mean you wrote the "last" one or the "latest" one? The latter I hope!! Cool song Geo, and nice job on the vocals. I did notice the backing harmonies go off pitch right towards the end of the song, during "I wiiiiiiiiilllllllll" but other than that I thought it was well done.Cam

[ibanez468]

Hey "G"Yeah, just checked this one out! You guys are ROCKIN' dude! This is a catchy tune! I like the pause too! Fits nicely IMO. Believe or not, it's kinda' got a RUSH feel to it, with the power-chords and all, and the descending guitar/bass lines. Mix is good ta' me. Maybe kick the snare up a notch. Sometimes it gets a little lost in there. Yeah, the bkgrd vocs got a little pitchy at the end there. Overall, it sounds tough dude! Good job! Keep at it!I-468