In Exile - New song, please critique

[rockmann]

Hi folks,Looking forward to comments on this new song. Again, this song is a bit a change of pace for us, but I think it fits in the acoustic rock world?http://www.soundclick.com/util/streamm3 ... iLyrics:In ExileWords by Antti Heikkinen 08/2006Performed by Project-43: http://www.project-43.com/I got more than I asked forAlways won everything I triedNever needed anything but youNever wanted anything elseWhen I see you it makes my dayWhen you go you take a piece of me with youAnd when I’m too far from youI’m a king without his queen in ExileJust a king without his queen in ExileLike the sun I revolve around your coreYou make me growYou’re the oxygen that fills my lungsYou’re the nicotine that sooths my nervesWhen I see you it makes my dayWhen you go you take a piece of me with youAnd when I’m too far from youI’m a king without his queen in ExileJust a king without his queen in ExileWhen I see you it makes my dayWhen you go you take a piece of me with youAnd when I’m too far from youI’m a king without his queen in ExileJust a king without his queen in Exile=====================Thanks in advance for listening and taking the time to comment.