Input on song for listing TAXI # Y131021PO

[drifter12]

CONTEMPORARY TOP 40 POP SONGS with FEMALE VOCALS that would be heard on the same radio stations as Katy Perry, Gwen Stefani, Selena Gomez, etc., are needed by the VP of A&R at a MAJOR Record Label to pitch to a Young, Female Group on their roster. He's looking for fun, youthful songs, with sassy lyrics that have a bit of an edge. However, he's NOT looking for "Miley on top of a wrecking ball" edge (these jokes just don't get old). A great melody that gets stuck in your head all day is a must, as always, in the Pop world! A radio-friendly song structure and demos that are strong enough to help you grab the attention of this big shot Music Exec are the order of the day. Mid-to-Up tempo songs with Female Vocals ONLY, please. Please submit one to three songs online or per CD. All submissions will be screened on a Yes/No basis - No full critiques. Submissions must be received no later than Monday, October 21, 2013.

If anybody could give input to this song musically, lyrically and also production wise I would be grateful.

Thanks Joseph-

HERE IS THE SONG LINK http://snd.sc/170Mjry