Is anyone fluid in French? I need you to listen t. . .

[MartyN]

This is a retro- French/English song I just finished, but before I put it out there. I need some folks who know French pronunciation to listen and see if I am saying something incorrectly. (I only know some basic French)
The song is "Mon Papillon" (My Butterfly). I wll give you the link to the song's page on my publishing website.
I really appreciate anyone taking the time and would gladly return the favor as a feedback person to you!
Thanks so much-
Marty
link: http://www.risetomorrowpublishing.com/music-22.html

[voyageserge]

Hi Marty.
I took a few minute to listen. Your accent is really English but charming.But you have to correct one thing. The only place where you do not pronounce a word correctely is when you say (MA papillon). You should say (MON papillon) .This word in french language is masculin and not female.
Good luck
Serge

[MartyN]

Hi Marty.
I took a few minute to listen. Your accent is really English but charming.But you have to correct one thing. The only place where you do not pronounce a word correctely is when you say (MA papillon). You should say (MON papillon) .This word in french language is masculin and not female.
Good luck
Serge

Thank you for your input, Serge. I have actually tweeked your suggestion and a few of the other words (input from another fluid French person) I Have reposted the song on my website and on TAXI. If I can be of help to you anytime, just contact me at mnels199@att.net.