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Is it whiney enough?

Post by funsongs » Wed Apr 10, 2019 8:02 am

:? :shock: :P - not for any listing... at least, not yet:
I'm Makin' It Cry Now
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an ode to a great luthier
acoustic guitars, electric bass, mandolin, piano, synth organ & vocals: my fun part
fiddle: Kurt Baumer

Chorus 1)
I'm makin' it cry now... like the piggies of a big sow
Don't ask me, "Why?!" I'm gonna make it cry
Don't ask me, "How?!" I'm makin' it cry now
Verse 1)
Came to me this way... all broken in pieces
Heard the owner say, "Can ya make 'er good as new?"
After lookin' her over... saw she had good bones
A little work and loving-kindness... she'll be singin' sweet tones
Chorus 2)
I'm makin' it cry now... like the piggies of a big sow
Don't ask me "How?!" I'm makin' it cry now
1/2 Verse instrumental -
Verse 2)
Now she's back together... all shiny and new
The owner's happy as a clam that's avoided the stew!
'Sounds better than ever... wears a brand new smile
He can hold 'er in his arms now... and play with her awhile
Bridge)
The cry you hear... aint the kind from sadness
Every tear is the sound of gladness
repeat Chorus 2)
So I'm makin' it cry now... like the piggies of a big sow
Don't ask me "How?!" I'm makin' it cry now
Tag/Ending)
Don't ask me "How?!" I'm makin' it cry now
Peter Rahill
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Re: Is it whiney enough?

Post by TuKatz » Wed Apr 10, 2019 6:28 pm

Nice song Peter, put a smile on my face. I think it "whines" just right.

Thanks for sharing.

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Re: Is it whiney enough?

Post by funsongs » Thu Apr 11, 2019 8:12 am

TuKatz wrote:
Wed Apr 10, 2019 6:28 pm
Nice song Peter, put a smile on my face. I think it "whines" just right.

Thanks for sharing.
Hey Charles - many thanks for taking the time to listen & comment. :? :P
Sincerely.
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Re: Is it whiney enough?

Post by RapperTriggaD1 » Sun Apr 14, 2019 8:48 am

I heard the song and I really enjoyed listening to the song and it is A really fun song to listen to keep up the great work.

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