wings wrote:Well, I listened to the entire tune- it's a nice idea. I love steel drums, and the Caribbean, for that matter. It does sound a bit muddy, however. I'm not sure where you are going, and yet you chose a big finale - which is fine, but a line from one of my conductors comes to mind. "Never louder than lovely." Now the term "lovely" can mean different things, but take it for what it's worth. I found myself reaching for the volume knob.
For starters, I'd strip out the MIDI beats that don't make music sense, and highlight the steel drums by complimenting them instead of contradicting them. Then, I'd figure out where I want to go with the piece as a whole.
For what it's worth, I've been to the Caribbean many times. I've listened to many steel drums. Sometimes being simple makes a better statement.
That being said, don't forget the Margaritas!![]()
~wings~
Thanks for giving my music a listen. I really appriciate it


There are many who would consider this melody as "Simple" (compared to an orchestral symphony


A good description would be "not too busy". It has to have that drive in tt, otherwise, it would sound weak, and anemic. You can have a relative simple melody, but there can be a lot of musicial activity going on behind it to give it a musicial backbone.
Samba, ramba, samba.
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