Thanks for the info. Got some time still for this one. I'll works on some kind of alternate ending & post it up. I like this genre, gonna work one some more for these kind of cuesRussell Landwehr wrote:Yeah, now you're zoning in on this. Don't worry about humanizing anything... the a'las aren't very human.
Here's the next thing, these TV folk like the cues to build. This one kinda peters out. Which is perfect for chill, but doesn't always work for Film and TV. Although, come to think of it, I've been forwarded with "petered out" submissions in this genre (the screeners used their politically correctness skills and called it "pseudo fades but I'm going to forward it anyway")
SO, in other words, probably any way you go with this ending it'll probably be right.
At any rate, this is a tasty number.
Russell
