KNOCK EM OUT!!!

[ciskokidd]

Hey Kel!Lot's of adrenaline in this one for sure! My comments are that you really want to keep that hook interesting especially at the beginning. I found myself waiting for the change of pace which came a little too late IMO. I think this may hurt your chances of forwards, but that's just my sense of it. One suggestion would be to try out some BT style edits of your distortion hook at about the 20-25 second mark. The thing is that you are riding on the same motif pretty much from the get go.Once it gets to the breakdown section it does help the contrast, but that doesn't occur until about the 40 second mark.I like the noize blasts in the hook section towards the end of the song - those were unexpected and perked my ears up.Just a few thoughts, but otherwise I think the tune rocks!Best,Cisko

[k o star]

Mar 24, 2009, 6:56am, partyofone wrote:Rocks balls! I like the sound and agressiveness. Can't think of any obvious ways to improve. Cool.Haha! Rocks Balls!... I like that term!! Thanks Patrick!-K

[k o star]

Mar 24, 2009, 1:08pm, ciskokidd wrote:Hey Kel!Lot's of adrenaline in this one for sure! My comments are that you really want to keep that hook interesting especially at the beginning. I found myself waiting for the change of pace which came a little too late IMO. I think this may hurt your chances of forwards, but that's just my sense of it. One suggestion would be to try out some BT style edits of your distortion hook at about the 20-25 second mark. The thing is that you are riding on the same motif pretty much from the get go.Once it gets to the breakdown section it does help the contrast, but that doesn't occur until about the 40 second mark.I like the noize blasts in the hook section towards the end of the song - those were unexpected and perked my ears up.Just a few thoughts, but otherwise I think the tune rocks!Best,CiskoThanks for feedback Cisko,What does BT style mean? I definitely wanna try out what U mention cos I agree with the description of the present state... appreciate the pointers...-K

[ciskokidd]

BT is the name of a remixer/composer/electronica artist.He does these fast edits and stuff. He did the Fast & Furious soundtrack that got so much hype a few years back.You can check him out here:http://www.btmusic.comBest,Cisko

[andreh]

Mar 25, 2009, 3:30pm, ciskokidd wrote:BT is the name of a remixer/composer/electronica artist.He does these fast edits and stuff. He did the Fast & Furious soundtrack that got so much hype a few years back.You can check him out here:http://www.btmusic.comBest,CiskoI would add the word "God" to any description of BT...he's on a level far above anyone else on the planet IMHO, and a true musical pioneer.André

[k o star]

ah... I remember BT now yea! Used to listen to some of his stuff in the 90s... will definitely re-check out his works on the Fast & Furious soundtrack... Good to learn from the masters... though my definition of God would be Trent Reznor, heheh!-K

[johnnyb333]

Def like the tempo and controlled chaos!!! The only thing is when the "real drums" come in at the almost punk style beat, I think the kick could come up a bit just to drive a little more. I always look forward to hearing your stuff cause of the way you utilize diff. noise in your songs like the electric static in this one. I am a huge Mr. Bungle fan and your stuff reminds me of that in parts.DO IT UP SOME MORE!!!

[k o star]

Thanks Johnny... That pointer about the kick will most definitely be fixed today... cos I can't wait to hear the difference!!! Appreciate the compliments man... Am so gonna DuWeet DuWeet DuWeet Dup!!! hahah! ^_^-K