Know Why / No eye / No I

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Know Why / No eye / No I

Post by nickec » Fri Oct 18, 2019 8:33 am

minding my own business hearing the clouds roll by
felt you smiling sweetly out of the corners of my I's
don't know why, who knows why
could have been a dream, could have been a scheme malign
why I am a victim of (a beauty so sublime/your beauty sublime)
I need to know why, somebody tell me why
had to tell you quickly nervous was what you made me
you told me you were taken, we would never ever be
you knew why, you told me why

every time I see you all I want to do is cry
any time I'm near you I feel as though I'm going to die
I don't know why
I don't know why

but
your friends put us together
often and then leave us alone
torture ensues, pleasantries exchange
and low
you tell me stories sexy
you tell me stories true and strange
why why why why why why

every time I see you all I want to do is cry
any time I'm near you I feel as though I'm going to die
I don't know why
I don't know why

You don't care that
every time I see you all I want to do is cry
any time I'm near you I feel as though I'm going to die
I deny
that I know why
There's no why
In my mind's eye
In my ear's eye
In this goodbye
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Re: Know Why / No eye / No I

Post by irwin » Thu Nov 07, 2019 1:08 am

Hi Nickec,

This lyric reads well to me, I have to say not bad at all. I am just wondering how would it sound with having music add to it.
I don't have any suggestions to say to you but I would like to encourage you to keep up the good work. Nice lyric.

Irwin

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