"Lazy Day"

[denmarion]

On this track I'm going for a laid back lazy feel. I've never sang on a track before I mostly just play trumpet. Any suggestions on how to make things sound better song form or production wise would be greatly appreciated.


http://www.ubetoo.com/dennismarion/25668

[jefflaplante]

Really cool track. This is possibly my favorite track I have ever heard on these forums. Really unique idea and great vibe. The trumpet is fantastic.

You might want to use some pitch correction on those lower vocals...they are not precise. Other than that, it is super cool, and definitely worthy of a film/tv placement down the road. You should have no problem getting a deal with this one...it is just so unique. Look into that pitch correction but certainly don't overdue it...you don't want to lose any of that soul.

[feaker66]

Feels lazy:)

Never ever heard nuthin like it before.

Very creative.

Loved the brass.

Some of the vox is off.

Good luck

paul

[greggo]

Nice! I like the feel of it and the hand claps. Would have loved for it to have gone into some sort of different groove somewhere in the middle, then back again. Good work!

[denmarion]

I figured the vocals were a little off. I glad you guys pointed it out. I'm going to do a little pitch tweaking then repost. Thanks guys!

[lor]

This is so cool. Love it.

It works as it is but I think you could also turn it into a very cool song. It seems to be structured into a verse/chorus. You've got a great melody. Just need some nice words.

lor

[DorothyWallace]

I really enjoyed that. I don't know much about production so I wont comment. Good Luck!

Dorothy