"Love At First Sight, Right?" (hiphop/rap)

[sinkaduck]

Written By Jason Blunden.Love At First Sight, Right?...you asked me to write you a poem to show my emotion, i came back with a rap and said baby this is poetry in motion, your eyes are as deep as the great big ocean, skin like a beach baby needs my sun lotion, your love and laughter is like a magic potion, a dash of crazy, a flutter of a lady, and maybe a sprinkle love for my baby, intelligent,loving and obedient, your a hearts perfect ingredient, young love so all we got is growing, potential is all we are showing, so lets keep flowing and going, hey? i hope you like your poem, best i can do, straight from the heart, all i want is you, lets never depart,love you through and through, right from the start,now that we grew, baby lets stay smart.[chorus][ Cant describe you in words nor a hook nor a chorus,the thesaurus took two steps back when he saw useverything about you is so insanely flawless,every storm you keep me warm no need to feel cautious. ]First time i saw you i felt this instant connection,to scared to approach you from the fear of rejection,strived past that section you made me your selection,my heart tingles like taste buds it feels like perfection,on my mind every single second of the day that im awake,our first couple dates consisted of burgers fries and milkshake,tryed being by your side on every little step we take,knowin ill make mistakes, stickin together i cant explain fate,blossom like spring, your a gift from above,your fit for a king, exquisite like a white dove,happiness you bring, honestly i cant get enough,greater than a fling, ive fallen, and fell in love.[chorus]© 2009Let Me Know what you think guys, will be much appreciated .More to Come!

[jjktunes]

I'm not in to rap but I'm glad somebody is out there writing about something positive and not M!$%ER FU#^ER , BI^^$ES and HO%$.nice change.

[msguest1]

This is really incredible, can tell it was written from the heart. Have you written anything recently? Do you feel like you could? Need some lyrics writing for me.

[LooknGlass]

I'm an old fogy, but that's a good rap. Talks about real things and not about thug life. My son is a rapper, how he got that from a mainly country dad, I'll never know, but he's good at it. This lyric is written good and flows well and keeps the thought. Nice work.