Lyrical Finesse?

[cconfident]

Thanks Rick!!! That's a lot of good feedback/input! I think you could be on to something there that DOES seem more like what one could mean by "lyrical finesse"
You've given me some homework... and it's almost midnight now... so I'm gonna sleep on it
Thanks for the example, as well! Nice song! did it get forwarded or a deal?

Much obliged,
Clifton

[RPaul]

Thanks Rick!!! That's a lot of good feedback/input! I think you could be on to something there that DOES seem more like what one could mean by "lyrical finesse"
You've given me some homework... and it's almost midnight now... so I'm gonna sleep on it
Thanks for the example, as well! Nice song! did it get forwarded or a deal?

Glad the feedback helped.

No, "Dream a Mighty Dream" did not get forwarded. Reason for return was, "Your song doesn't showcase a mood, vibe, or lyric/hook that could drive the spot we're targeting." More or less the story of my life on these ad and movie pitches.

Rick