Modern Rock Song... Let It Rain (Updated)

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LOVE some feed back on this modern rock? tune... Comments on production, structure and lyric would be awesome.www.williamthomasanderson.com/w2/let_it_rain.mp3Let It RainWords ands music by William Thomas AndersonCopyright 2008Verse 1In the distance I canI can hear the pouring rainIt’s the same sound that I’veThat I’ve heard here everyday, everydayOn the horizon I canI can see the lightning flashIt is written that this is the The whip of the lash, of the lashChorusLet it rain, rain down on me x2Verse 2On the wind I canI can smell the burning ashI’m surrounded by By the roaring thunders crashThe storms been raging nowSince the dawn of the first ageNo where to run No where to hide from its rageChorusLet it rain, rain down on me x2Verse 3Many might haveTried to stand in its wayMany a mighty man haveBeen buried beneath its wavesChorusLet it rain, rain down on me x4