My Best - PO Mix

[deantaylor]

Thanks everyone. We got what we needed, so I took down the link. We are pitching it now.

[VanderBoegh]

GREAT song, Dean! I've got no feedback for you other than that, lol. Paul's voice is perfect.

~~Matt

[Casey H]

Written with Greggo, Produced by Peeyo!

Paul Otten always does a great production with a stellar performance as he does here.

My concern would be that the song, as written, doesn't have a stand-out chorus. The chorus is a bit pre-chorus-y. It feels stronger later in the song as it grows on you (a lot!) but that first chorus is the most critical listening point. And the melody gets repetitive in places without enough variation.

It does set a mood and vibe well so it may do well with the sync folks. Having done a ton of songs with Paul, I know libraries like the big C love his voice. His vocals are awesome. Love the guitar solo. Pitch away and see! I hope it gets picked up by one or more of our "go to" libraries!!

Best,
Casey

[feaker66]

Hi there. Got that Simon and Garfunkle vibe right off. Seems like the chorus should be longer and say more. Kind of abrupt in spots???
I copied two lines and tried to paste them here and it didn't work. The first and second lines both go up in the last word. I was thinking leave the first line where the note stays lower and the second line go up. Very small observation. One other thing is that I think the chorus is a little loud?? I know I am rambling.
I was a varsity basketball coach in the high school that I taught. I would always tell my assistant to keep firing your thoughts in my ear. I may not answer you, but I wanna hear what you see.
lastly, the quieter simple last verse sat excellent in my old (75) ears. yur singer is very good take care and keep "at it"
paul

[deantaylor]

Thank you Matt, Casey, Paul. We are pitching it now!