My new song! ¿Any advice?

[grevisse]

Hi there! I´ve finished my new song. It´s called "Que el cielo me acompañe" and i´m looking for comments and advices.

Http://www.grevisseonlinestore.com/mp3/ ... ne_192.mp3

Thanks for your time!!

[ottlukk]

Grevisse!
There is a lot of "pretty" in this composition. I listened all the way through, and I felt as if there were three songs, maybe more. As if you had taken different movements from an opera, and put them into one piece. The tempo changed from one section to another, is this on purpose? You have a wonderful voice, and for the most part, I enjoyed this -- there were constant surprises.
I'd like to ask (since I can't translate the lyrics), is there a genre that this is appropriate for? Is this a style I am unaware of?
Thanks for posting, it had a certain charm to it.
Ott

[thokus]

wow Great voice ... I dont know what genre to go with but its for sure a good One .. May need a little more EQ'ing .. sounded a bit muffed at parts . But overall a really great song . What ever the hell you were saying .. i liked it . Loved it when the orchestra came in full ... Good dynamics .. Hope you find a niche for it ..
Tom

[grevisse]

Thanks a lot for your words! I´m really happy because of your feedback! Sorry about my english but i´m doing my best for you to understand. What´s my style? mmm... I did death metal, country, soul, balads, pop, and studied classic conservatory. I recorded and produced this song by myself and preparing my show to play live right now.

I´m going to translate the lyrics for you to close the circle (message, lyrics, music, interpretation)
thanks again and stay in touch! I´m so happy you liked it!

this is my site http://www.grevisse.com

[grevisse]

Some missed answers...

Ottlukk: about the tempo that change between sections... I don´t use click. I just feel the tempo I need and go for the feeling.

Thokus: About EQ... it´s true all that you say! This is the first song i recorded, mixed and produce. I hope the next one to sound better than this!

Thanks guys! Listening to your great song now! byebye