My Songs...Your Thoughts

[shaman]

Hi Eveyrone...

I just wanted to get some feedback on my songs. I just released my cd Strange Times and we'll see what happens. Gotta follow my dream and never give up. I know asking for feedback AFTER my release is well....in reverse but...So let me know what you think and be honest I can take it... LOL The first is Strange Times and the second is Night of Stone

http://www.reverbnation.com/play_now/song_3175093

http://www.reverbnation.com/play_now/song_3175127

Thanks everyone
John

[orest]

Well, I don't think it's too late to change some things even if you've released the song on a CD.
If you want to aim for the movies/TV's business, you can read the listings and try to target 1-2 songs for that particular listing.

I listened to the first song, and I thing you have a great vibe.
But I would like to hear more variation, it feels like you have the same drum beat throughout the whole song, and I also thing this song would benefit from a more realistic drum sound as well.

[ottlukk]

Shaman:
I listened to both songs. You really have a great voice. I flashed back to the Doors and Moody Blues. I think both tunes were very well done.
I'm repeating myself here, but if you want a lot of feedback on your songs, post a link, asking for critiques one song at a time, on the peer to peer forum.
Wish I had a voice like yours.
Ott

[ottlukk]

My Bad regarding peer to peer. I thought I was on the general hangout forum. You're doing it right.
Ott

[shaman]

Yo Ott: Thank you...I appreciate your feedback man. It means alot. This has been long time coming...just started singing last April and never thought I could put this together. Been writing for years and finally got the guts to go out and try it.

Lets keep in touch brother
John

[shaman]

orest,
thanks man...ya i am woking with limited resources regarding musicians/lack there of bu...i'm trying but thank you for your feedback and i'll post some other songs as well.
peace
john