Yes, I agree that " my " would make it more personal than "this". It's funny how you don't notice things until someone points it out.
Another reason that the forum is so great
Thanks again for the help.
Tom
Need advice for song...is this too depressing ?
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Re: Need advice for song...is this too depressing ?
Hi Steve
Yes, I agree that " my " would make it more personal than "this". It's funny how you don't notice things until someone points it out.
Another reason that the forum is so great
Thanks again for the help.
Tom
Yes, I agree that " my " would make it more personal than "this". It's funny how you don't notice things until someone points it out.
Another reason that the forum is so great
Thanks again for the help.
Tom
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