this song is a rough demo . I AM NOT a hip hop producer(obviously) but I think the song lyric and hook is pretty strong. It needs that modern hip hop thang. also a more authentic vocalist for this genre.I'm thinking film/tv submissions but also label artists when those listings come up. I had submitted this for an usher listing couple years back and wanted to bring it up to date and make it shine
any of you producer/vocalists out there want to tackle this. Ill split it 50/50 for licensing fees collected or contact me and we can work something out
peace
scotty
http://www.broadjam.com/player/player.p ... 748_293970
One And One Is Three
It was the fourth of July, fireworks on the beach
When I first realized though we were sitting together you were far out of reach
Ever since that moment , like a ship on the tides
YouÂ’ve been drifting away to someone from the past, I should have seen all the signs
Like every time that certain song came on the radio you would tell me to change the dial
And where once we used to laugh about all the dreams we would share
Now I never seem to see you smile.....thereÂ’s no denial
Chorus
One and one is three as far as I can see
‘Cause everywhere we go I see the shadow of his ghost
You say it’s over and through now that it’s only me and you
But when you’re holding me in the dark
I wonder if he’s really out of your heart
I’m trying hard not to believe
But it doesn’t take a genius to see
When you add it up between you and me... one and one is three
I take you to dinner, a quiet table for two
Then question myself over champagne and candles has he been here with you
I’m living enslaved to a man’s greatest fear
When the woman he loves is close by his side but she’s not really here
Because I know his spell on you still lingers like the fragrance after the rain
Now I’m just waiting for the time we’re making love
When I’ll hear you call his name...it’s all too plain
Chorus 2
One and one is three as far as I can see
‘Cause everywhere we go I see the shadow of his ghost
You say it’s over and through now that it’s only me and you
But when you’re holding me in the dark
I wonder if he’s really out of your heart
Like the memory of a summer day
It seems what we had is fading fast away
I have my suspicions but I don’t want to face...one and one is three
Bridge
When you’re kissing me are you thinking of him
Am I out of my mind to think he’s under your skin
Is our future secure or are we nearing the end of the road... don’t you know
Chorus
(ending with ad lib vocals)
words and music copyright 2007 Scott Seabock ScottyRock Music (ASCAP)
need R&B producer/vocals for song
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