New Age submission - comments?

[DBarnett]

Hey Paul,
This may get the "needs more of a dynamic arc" comment in your critique
But with this listing looking for "ARTISTS and COMPOSERS are needed by an Independent Record Label looking for artists to sign!" it could get the Forward
Best of luck my friend

[BuzzReed]

Thanks to you all for the help establishing links and comments on the track.
I struggled getting the soprano sax to sit back in the mix. Yes it was close miked in a small room so I’ll have to rethink that going forward. It usually works well but this idiom calls for a different treatment.
Thanks for the consideration and objectivity!