New Song - This Time

[erandall]

hey Cam whoever you are...I LOVE this song...It's been in my head all day. If it's you singing, I think you should keep it that way! It's fantastic...As for "lean' vs. "mean" cuisine, I have to say I don't like either one. To me, it's the only time the lyric felt like it was trying too hard. Other than that, I loved it and was with you every step of the way. And it's kinda sexy!Good luck,,Ellen

[cameron]

Hey Ellen,OK, you made my day. Not sure if it's my singing or my avatar you found sexy, but I'm guessing you like chimps. I've had a real bad cold all week, and it actually helped my voice work better for this song I think. You wouldn't have thought it was sexy if you'd heard the parts I had to cut out of me hacking my lungs out between verses. On the "Lean Cuisine" part, I spent longer writing the lyrics to the four lines in the bridge than I did the whole rest of the song, and never did get it to flow as well. Probably mulled over those four lines for two or three days! I think it's the word "miss" in the previous line that's not working. I think if I change that and change the phrasing of the lean cuisine line I think it might work. Anyway thanks, I'll see if I can fix that bit.And I'm really glad you like it. THAT's why I do this. Cam

[erandall]

Okay, chimps are cute but they're not sexy, I don't think. Unless perhaps you're a female chimp, which I hope I haven't degenerated into quite yet! No, I like your voice and the direct and sensual quality of the lyrics. (and nobody has to know anything about what was going on btw verses!) And the avatar thing is beyond me. I don't even know the word!Great song, pure and simple, and doesn't sound like every other song out there. That's one reason it's stuck in my head. Cheers,Ellen

[cameron]

Ellen, I don't mean to turn this into a mutual admiration club, but that's exactly the way I feel about your songs. Nice job with the forward on "Can't You See?". You're very creative.Cam