New Tune: Murder With A Smile

[rockmann]

One more tune reaching maturity... This one is a bit different for us, I think. Not really sure what genre it's best suited in. The subject matter is inspired by mob movies and more specifically, The Soprano's.Your comments on song structure, mix, guitar tone, vocals etc. are always appreciated.http://www.soundclick.com/util/streamm3 ... q=hiThanks for taking the time to listen and comment!

[rockmann]

Aw, c'mon... It can't be that bad, is it?

[rockmann]

Wow... I'm really surprised with the no comments on this song. I think this song is somewhat unique and certainly a different sound for us. Several have listened, but no comments. I would appreciate some feedback even if its critical.Thanks!

[dada]

Hey Steve,Summers taking it's toll on my writing time, haven't been around for a while.... I sort of dig this tune... the chorus instrumentation is very cool and newer sounding... the verse progression seems a little drab... the 2 chord choices don't grab me like the chorus and the lower octave vocals are lacking to my ears... maybe an alternate chord on the second to make it more interesting... Also the pre-chorus section, I could hear a more syncopated lyric line helping out... sort of a mild Disturbed treatment... You guys are definitely hard-working which in my mind always leads to stronger and better material...Hope that helps for an objective listen...Dave

[rockmann]

Quote:Hey Steve,[...]Hope that helps for an objective listen...It certainly does, Dave. Thanks for taking the time. I think I know exactly what you mean with the verse chord progression. I'll work on some alternatives and see what I can come up with.Thanks for taking the time to listen and comment. I'll be sure to post back with any changes.Later.