Newbie seeking feedback

[deegeorge]

Hi folks i have recently joined TAXI and thought I would say hi. It would be great if I could get some feedback on my music.I am also interested in collabarating with other writers,I'm looking to hearing everyones work.All the best ,David

https://soundcloud.com/dg-mcclean

[nick.moxsom]

Dee, welcome to the best forum there is. Another Brit... way hay!

I had a listen to 'Pockets', and it's clear you can not only write a good song, but record it in good quality too. That's half the battle.

No disrespect, but folks round here are pretty busy, so if you point to one specific track per post, and ask about that track, you won't frighten people off. It's a daunting task listening to a whole bunch of someone's music and making pertinent comments.

Also, try and be specific about where you'd like to see your music going – do you aim to pitch to charts-based artists and publishers, or are you aiming more towards film and TV? In my opinion, with this song, if you're aiming at A&R people, you could tighten up (and shorten) the structure, and it's almost a pre-requisite (at least amongst the Taxi screeners) that you introduce some new ear candy for each new section, to keep the listener's attention. But you're already well on your way, bro.

Nice work.

Nick

[bamtone]

Hey David,
Nice to meet you!
I'm listening to Minute More. Nice track, production and all!

[TimWalter]

I listened to Pockets Full of Thanks. Good song, excellent production. Only comment I would make is I didnt think the "country" tag was appropriate, song didnt seem country to me at all. Very good song, very well done, but just not country. IMHO.
Tim

[deegeorge]

Thanks for the comments folks .I'll know if I post again to just ask for feedback on the one song.

[LittleRedChurch]

Nice 80's feel. To me, anyway. Sweet! Catchy!!

Welcome!!!

Ireland, eh? Lucky man!!

Graham

[deegeorge]

Thanks for your comment Graham .Yeah i'm from the Emerald Isle There doesn't seem to be that many from Ireland on here